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Old 09/06/2018, 04:50 PM   #1
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Lightbulb [SA:MP Mapping]San Andreas Police Department Training Service

I made this map in 2 hours and worked alot on textures etc but still its empty in interior well i m just showing it here so i can know what things should i put in that interior well comment how is it and thanks for checking the thread.

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Old 09/06/2018, 04:56 PM   #2
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Default Re: [SA:MP Mapping]San Andreas Police Department Training Service

Good for a beginner. But I'll list what you should improve on.
- Text. You don't have to make it rainbow everytime. One color should do just fine. Also it's flying in the air.
- Alignment. Your SAPD logos aren't aligned properly. One is in the center of the left side but the right one isn't centered.
- Creativity. The targets, you could show some of them fallen. Add more stuff to it. I'd like to see improvement.
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Old 09/06/2018, 05:01 PM   #3
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Default Re: [SA:MP Mapping]San Andreas Police Department Training Service

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Good for a beginner. But I'll list what you should improve on.
- Text. You don't have to make it rainbow everytime. One color should do just fine. Also it's flying in the air.
- Alignment. Your SAPD logos aren't aligned properly. One is in the center of the left side but the right one isn't centered.
- Creativity. The targets, you could show some of them fallen. Add more stuff to it. I'd like to see improvement.
hmm i will work on that more
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Old 09/06/2018, 06:24 PM   #4
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You should texture that yellow and white door too, it looks a little out of place with the building. Maybe make the PD logos smaller, they are like half the size of the door right now.

Other than that, looks good man.
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Old 09/06/2018, 08:30 PM   #5
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Default Re: [SA:MP Mapping]San Andreas Police Department Training Service

This needs some more work and the solid black texture and the large logos, don't really look that good, also you could have used the large lcd tv screen and re-texture it to become a window, also you could add some weapons and some objects that you would see at a shooting range, also you could have added a wall and the top where the sign it, so it look more realistic instead of just a floating sign, this map needs some more, but hey, its your first map, and practice becomes perfect, keep trying and you will do much better.
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Old 10/06/2018, 08:16 PM   #6
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hmm thanks
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